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A New Gay Story - Bolero

JoshPrim Blog Last Activity 9 years ago 576 views 6 comments

I've written a new sex story called 'Bolero'.  It's about a college sophomore losing his virginity to a guy in the dorms.  If interested in reading it, email me at joshprim2@gmail.com and I'll send you a copy.


You can also read it online at https://www.literotica.com/s/bolero-1?page=1


If you do read it, please let me know how you liked it.  Thanks.

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gm4yngr
9 years ago

Nice story Josh, I had never heard of Literotica before, will be spending a lot of time exploring that site. I've been reading stories on  nifty.org for years (I even wrote a story on there). Seems like you wrote a story on nifty too but I don't recall what it was, care to share that link with us?

9 years ago

I just read your story Bolero. I thought It was a great story. Very creative and lot of detail. I have bookmarked your stuff on Literotica and am looking forward to reading them all when I have time...Cheers - Ricky

Dupsspanker
9 years ago

I've been reading your stories and love them. They have been getting better over the years and this one is the best yet. Keep up the good work :-)

9 years ago

I was interested to read your story because I've just started writing some erotic fiction myself for the first time. Although I'm a novice in this particular genre I'm a published writer in another area and I've noticed there's a market for gay erotic fiction on Amazon. 'Bolero' seemed fairly well written to me, in terms of construction, grammar, flow etc. The dialogue was good and conversational and I liked it that you took time to set everything up in terms of environment and characters. Like I said I'm no expert on erotic fiction, yet if If had any suggestion it might be to introduce some seductive, suggestive and erotic language earlier on. You write well but the language and words can be a bit dry and mechanical sometimes, with word choices being a bit standard and uninventive. Hope that's helpful because I mean it as a constructive criticism. Otherwise, good work I reckon.

ukbluboi
9 years ago

I loved the new story Seems to me that there are further adventures to be had there. Any plans for part 2 or dare i say, hopefully part 3????

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